A fortunate brush of thin lipluscious skin which stuck breathtakingly electrifying between us.
Two strangers deciding communication was best unspoken,
in serendipitous synchronisity.
In that fleeting moment where we melted into each other, we moved in unison.
The solid earth shifted tectonically underneath unsteady feet,
your taste, rich and satisfying against my hunger;
Ironic against sardonic of a sharpened tongue,
now exploring the warm welcoming crevasses of your soul.
Fired synapses exploded Cyrillic
inviting much more than pillowed talk
listless passionkilling
a hint only of the intelligence behind
the manoeuvring moistened lips.
If I’m never to be kissed again
let this moment be recorded.
Musings and Smatterings 
Yes–edit!! Lol. Lovely lines here, particularly the last two:) x
Shan, this is beautiful and intense and so well captures the essence of a moment, charged with meaning that your atmospheric words charge but do’t explain, leaving the reader richer for it. “fired synapses exploded Cyrillic” is brilliant and captures the whole energy of the poem. Brilliant!
=)) fantastic….lol & adore the image you!!! =))
mmm…love the sensual moment…and the desire to have it captured…ah if only we could live in them…smiles.
Shan, I really enjoyed this beautiful flowing and sensual poem. Grasped the reader from the very beginning. Thanks for sharing.
Lovely and sensual….
An intense and deliciously satisfying poem. Full of sensuality and tension. I love it.
I would still edit it though:) Best x
yummy!
lovely…love the title and the thought of never being kissed again..so my no say not so…bkm
good lord yes, and i would play it again and again…lol…very sensual shan…yet beautiful as well…
‘Ironic against sardonic of a sharpened tongue’ rather appreciated this line in particular, but really enjoyed your whole poem..
Luscious and lusty!
If I’m never to be kissed again let this moment be recorded. This is MEMORABLE!!! A beautiful piece.
“a hint only of the intelligence behind/the manoeuvring moistened lips.” too many good lines to pick but that one stood out for me. Fine poem, full of life and fire.
This moment–NOW!–is eternity…always and forever!
And what a beautiful moment you have imaged. Thank you!
PEACE!
And to think this is my last read of the night.. perhaps a lovely dream will follow..
Beautiful emotions throughout this piece Shan…many great lines and I like the easy way it reads..
Quite lovely indeed:-)
flamming!!! wow, Shan! grand!
Oh, those last lines!
I feel the walls come tumblin’ down..yeah…it’s been a while but I remember that. Go Shan -get your groove on!
I’d say that moment ended the misery for a bit! How I pine for the days when such actions were exciting rather than expected. How does one go avoiding the frogs to end up with a toad! 😉 Kidding, (the love of my life would shoot me for such a statement!) Loved the write, the images painted and weaved…oh yes, I do pine for those moments!
oh nice lines !
This piece drips wonderful imagery and sentiment. Fantastic write ~ Rose
mmm the passion is overdrive. Yes could we have lots of replays
Shan this is excellent your wordsmithing I didn’t think could get better – it has