Live



you enter this life without a thing
only the skin upon your back
and the breath within your lungs
those moments in between
sucking in the air
for the first time
and the last
try to
live

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6 responses to “Live

  1. I’m tryin’. I’m tryin’.

    I like the form on this. The shortening lines reinforce the carpe diem theme by suggesting the brevity of life.

  2. With your style of form and the picture, I get the feeling of being out of breath. I liked this very much!

Put me out of my misery people!

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