I am posting this as a responce to Bethan’s Wicked Wednesday incentive, but I was aiming this time for something a little more sensual than what I normally write. If any of my readers read Beth’s blog you will know that she is an extremely good sensual writer, something I aim to be myself. I decided that Senryu was probably the best form for this poem. Words are easy for me, feelings, not so. Enjoy and see what you think, and please, feel free to leave comments.
Bodies move as one
As the throng of the beat owns
Invading the mind
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Hand in hand they seek
Each others hearts in rythm
Cheek to cheek they meet.
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Breathlessness heightens,
A touch of the waist, replied
By a slip of smile
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Slowly she raises
Her eyes, searching out his soul,
In tandem they’re found.
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Lost in another
Dancing in the dark, drowning
In one another.
Musings and Smatterings 
what beautiful drowning…my wife was a dancer for years…
I hope then, that it transported you back to the days when you danced together. Thank you and welcome to my poetry 🙂
Brilliant poem!
You painted quite a picture in my head with this piece.
Awesome read, my friend.
Thanks you Justin, and it’s nice to see a new face visiting 😉
cool.
you’ve got a daimond in this one
I enjoyed writing it, I used to dance but due to an injury Ive been unable to get my balance, I suppose it takes me back to think of the dancers!
u have no trouble with expressing feeling in this poem. great job. i could really see the dances…
~IS
I’m happy that you enjoyed! I’m also amazed that the feelings shon through. Thanks for your wonderful comments.
Lovely and felt-
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of art.