A heartbreaths away

I can’t be your redemption
in a million languages
I cannot even find my own,
mottled beneath your downy need
and blinkered juxtaposition.
With only a veil of clarity,
we cannot touch
although pink pulse yearns heart beats
for the want of your void shaped hole.

I wish I could be more,
but I’m forgettable.

~ by RepressedSoul on November 24, 2011.

Posted in Longer works, Musings

3 Responses to “A heartbreaths away”

‘I wish I could be more,
but I’m forgettable.’

Lady… you and your writing is anything but forgettable! This strikes such a chord with me.

Thank you

The Linnet said this on November 24, 2011 at 7:28 pm | Reply
Oh this is barbed and delightful and acid and everything mixed together. Fabulous. x

fridayam said this on November 24, 2011 at 10:12 pm | Reply
‘I wish I could be more,
but I’m forgettable.’

Loved the these lines .. Shan… Beautiful one..

Divya said this on November 25, 2011 at 9:45 am | Reply