It’s not your dimples that get me.
It’s the eyes.
Any woman would die for those lashes,
luxurious, dark; surrounding two
aqua pools of depth and intelligence.
The way the sides crease with laughter,
even when you giggle at my unfunny jokes.
Marks of-old enough to know better,
but young enough not to care overtly
what strangers make of your outer coverings.
A 55 word story
Thanks to Jingle for the above award. I chose it because of my taste in music!

nice pick!
another excellent 55.
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shakira
Very nice…I love it at any length.:-)
Thanks, coming from you that’s a huge compliment I adore your blog!
Excellent 55! Your word choice and descriptions create such imagery!
Thanks Suzi and how nice of you to say hi!
it’s always the eyes! wonderful, Shan!
I like hands usually
Oh and intelligence is also up there in the must have list hehee
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/yes-i-can-handle-it.html
my post for the Poets’ Rally is here.
thanks for reading it.
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Read amd commented happy thursday!
i loved your blog shan! really breathtaking.. if you have sometime take a ride on mine .. http://mysunshineforeverblogger.blogspot.com/ and tell me what you think, would really appreciate it ..thank you “:)
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/20/poetry-blog-community-award-from-adam/
another poetry award 4 u.
have a beautiful day!
I appreciate your uplifting comments and handsome spirits.
cheers!
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take the awards from previous post after that.
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I like the approach you took with this subject. It’s not often that you just find a subject so to the point and enlightening.
You did full justification to 55 words- no one can do better.
simply fabulous.